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PostSubject: Poetic Stuff   Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:11 am

Five seven five.

Counting grains, I feel the constant struggle.

Each one I count, I must count double.

Often I wonder, if they are worth the trouble.

Could I seal myself off, like I were inside a bubble?

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My life has no truth, and I can't land on a lie...

So I fell through the ground as it passed me by...
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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:17 am

Happy bunny hop hop hop.

Happy bunny, watch him flop.

Hear the hunter laugh non stop.

Happy bunny's blood drop drop.

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Falling, weightless, from a midnight sky...

Turning, twisting, wishing I could fly...

My life has no truth, and I can't land on a lie...

So I fell through the ground as it passed me by...


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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Sat Aug 28, 2010 1:45 am

The first poem is deep, and a window to your very soul...

The second is just disturbing.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:35 am

Probably for the best...

Thanks Val.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:31 am

A sword in his sheath.

A crushed maple leaf.

The sounds of battle far behind.

Could anything still be on your mind?

The answer, no, reveals itself.

Soon I shall place this book on it's shelf.

Skorne, the mightiest of his sort.

Less of man, more a Juggernaut.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:09 am

Falling, weightless, from a midnight sky...

Turning, twisting, wishing I could fly...

My life, no truth, but I cannot land on a lie...

I fell through the ground, as it passed me by...

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Tue Nov 16, 2010 5:09 am

No rest for the wicked no remorse.
Choose your direction now choose your course.
Can we say we all are innocent?
Is that really what we meant.

No I didn't think think it was that way.
No I never thought I could even stand to stay.

No rest for for the wicked no remorse.
Choose your direction now choose your course.
Can we say we are innocent?
Is that what we really meant?

A girl lies on the street not attractive enough to meet.
She bleeding from a wound, probably gonna die soon.
But hey, at least it's not you right?
You'll sleep in bed safe tonight.

No rest for the wicked no remorse.
Choose your direction now choose your course.
Can we say that we are innocent?
Is that what we really meant?

A war's going on outside.
Miles away, nothing to deride.
Ten thousand souls already lost.
But this is just the cost.

Is it the way we see it?
The way it's true?
Can we expect any more from you?
No respect. No remorse.
No time to choose your course.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Tue Nov 16, 2010 8:45 am

wow zed that one must have taken awhile very poetic and very true i find :/
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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Tue Nov 16, 2010 12:49 pm

Poor cmd (command), out of demand.
There is a great deal he may never understand.

But yeah it took me three minutes.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:55 am

Playing with my mind,
You leave me behind,
Without a care,
I am left there,
Where?
They didn't share.
It's a shame.
I'm to blame.
The beast was not tame.
And only I did it maim.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:04 am

Absence felt alone.
I'm not coming home.
Don't ring the phone-
because it too is alone.

We like it this way,
So why can't we stay?

Just society
It's crowding me

And I don't care.
If you want to follow me follow me there.
You're just sheep, tied to chair,
Electrocuted now with fuzzy hair.

Oh it's a just shame
we don't have anyone to blame
so we cannot maim
or claim
this drudgery society.

It consumes me.

And you too it's just a shame,
Death pain struggle and strife is just part of the game.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Sat Nov 20, 2010 6:54 am

Five Seven Five

Poetic thingies.
They are quite awesome mostly.
Yes, this is haiku.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Sun Nov 21, 2010 8:02 am

Humans invented lust.
For them it is a must.

Humans invented hate.
Of all the things they could create.

Humans invented greed.
It means they take more than they need.

Humans invented gluttony.
Don't dismiss yet, just humour me.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:38 am

I'd give you the world, but it would burn in my hands.

I'd give you my life, by that would never be in your demands.

I'd give you all the money I ever knew.

If only that would appease you.
_

Death and struggle are a staple here.

I just thought I'd make that clear.

Here all men thrive on fear.

And this happens 365 days a year.

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A pickle sandwich on the bench.

A shame it's bolted with a wrench.

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Zed's Nine Eleven Poem Thingy
2,976 souls died that day.

In a very simplistic, brutal way.

It happened in September, rather than May.

The whole world prayed for their souls that day.


Because some men thought it wise.

They severed all their earthly ties.

And then they all took to the skies.

In their minds what they did was wise.


Eight months and nineteen days.

People worked in many ways.

And all they saw was a blood red haze.

It was not a happy sight to gaze.

And you could eat no sandwich, even with mayonnaise.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Fri Dec 10, 2010 7:59 am

Such a poet. *swoon*
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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Wed Dec 22, 2010 7:00 am

This is a poem, best read nine minutes long.

I can't truly say it's much a song.

But keep hanging 'round and we'll keep making sound, for only a few dollars a pound.


I was forced into a meeting, a party with fun fleeting, with my friend Allen McBoo. Five minutes in and my patience was thin so I took a quick trip to the loo. I spent an hour sitting nearby the shower, hoping that it would end soon. But with a knock on the door, my plan had a flaw, and they asked what I needed to do. I responding "just finishing" and with my energy diminishing I stepped out onto the scene. It was mean, the scene, like some others had been, and the cocktail wieners were gone.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:13 am

Beauty shining in the light,

Eyes sparkling in the night,

The more I see the more I believe,

Has an angel come for me?

Should I agree should I defy?

Shall I finally see through the night?
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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Sat Feb 05, 2011 2:31 am

Tell me who you think you are, when you wish upon a star.

Tell me what you think, when you stand on the brink... or despair.

Why do we care for you? Why do we do what we do?

Why are you still here? Will the future make it clear.

See the sparkle in your eyes.

See it's slow demise.

Watch your fate slowly be sealed.

Watch as your wounds are never healed.

Stay clear and true,

Stay here with me, for you.

Ask me why I tell you this?

Ask me why I'm here with you now.

I don't know anyhow.

I don't know even now.



Sky falling every day, can you see it another way? If so, oh won't you stay? We need people like you here to play. This game we call life, it puts us in such strife, but we never even thought to end it with a knife.



Trippy clolours everywhere, dancing in and out of her hair. She confuses me, but I can still see. See the sights around me. And the way, she doesn't let me free.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:04 am

You have a talent, Zed.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Tue Feb 08, 2011 7:25 am

Blood and mayonnaise don't mix Zed and how do you bolt a pickled sandwich to a bench anyway?
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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:05 am

Life is but a dream

It's always on the mean

Never on the happy

Everyone's always snappy

Yelling at themselves

Always at the shelves
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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Fri Feb 11, 2011 2:26 am

We will fall as far as we can.

Avoiding the damnation of man.

What we've done, what we've said,

They cannot be taken back, our hands are red.

Falling even further, avoiding the many spines.

We vaguely remember the past, and all of the good times.

Now we have no remorse, no regret.

We decided we would fall, and now we must let.

Chaos far behind, the future below,

No chance to turn around yet still none to know.

How long will we fall?

Damn them all.

We'll fall for a century...

If you just fall with me.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Fri Feb 11, 2011 2:27 am

Her brown hair clouded her face,

The silken robe flowed around this place,

There was no gravity, like we were in space,

And then she vanished, without a trace.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:31 pm

Aim high world of mine,
Slowly descend into time,
Unfurling like a ball of twine,
Descend quietly, like a mime,

Alas the world of mine fell apart,
To see such a sight broke my heart,
But as the future breaks over the dawn,
I know know that the world is far better gone,

So now I'm alone in this empty space,
All my life vanished, not leaving a trace,
No longer shall I be forced to see your face,
Those thoughts I still have away I try and chase,

But truly, I'm a peace now,
You're finally gone... wow,
What do I do? And how?
I want you here, ow.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetic Stuff   Mon Mar 07, 2011 2:28 am

Forced through life one day at a time, a blurr of colours and the sound of a ryhme, it all just apart half the time but you didn't know.

Pulled through the hole that was far too small, forced to mix and match with the rest of them all, pulled down... how drawl.

All I ever wanted was to die, to be at peace now, I seem to have another task.

I see the sun, in it I bask and I see the wrongs we have right in front of us.

How long can we stay here?

How long can we cower in fear,

How long does it make sense,

To substitute action with ignorance,

Don't ask me why you stay right there, about the universe you could not care, but now that I see the fate of man, I truly understand what I must now do.

Pulling the jacket over the shoulder, diving over the huge ass boulder, making my way with just a song and an open hand, I'll pimgramige to make them understand.

Maybe it's too much.

Everyone's so out of touch.

Three people with the eyes like mine,

And they can't help it they just whine.

So with a pilgramige in my heart I'll run off and just start, seeing who will listen and who will act. Probably none, probably none at all, but I must try now, if I don't what am I?

Am I? Just a figment? Am I just one in seven billion? Am I just one in a million? How long can I last, running from the past and future and the present all in one.

No, it won't be much fun.

Like a loaded gun,

Stuck to my head, I'll die when I'm dead, but for now it doesn't matter.

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My life has no truth, and I can't land on a lie...

So I fell through the ground as it passed me by...
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